Day 3
So here I was at the Masai Mara and there was no sign of Teresa.
Yes. That's the name that meant love to me. The sweet name that had changed my life forever.
Never mind about the strange place where I met her again (that I talked about in Day 2). I get a little shy about this romantic stuff sometimes and it really isn't interesting. At least not to me. Any way don't despair; I'll get back to that in a minute.
I went round the camp and looked everywhere. No sign of Teresa.
I remember we went together for the game drive. And I positively remember that we came back together. So how does somebody disappear in a bush in the middle of nowhere?
The tears were now flowing freely down my cheeks. I know men don't cry and I wasn't crying, not really, it's just them tears that were running out of control flowing out and stuff.
For the first time in my lousy unromantic life, I admitted it to myself. I loved the woman. More than I had ever loved any other human being in my life.
Yeah. It was out now. Laugh for all you're worth but I've said it. I LOVE TERESA VERY VERY VERY MUCH.
Now I feared that the woman (the only woman) I had ever loved in my entire life was gone forever. I feared that I would never see her again. How would she survive out there with all those wild beasts and lions and stuff?
"We're calling in the police," the camp manager informed me.
The guy was trying too hard to console me. Like calling in the police would take away all my problems and bring Teresa back. Like a kid who is offered candy and it magically takes away all the problems. Looking at him through my tears and I felt pity for him. He would never understand in 100 years.
"But it is not to do with lions," he added in his understandable yet inadequate English. "Lions never come here and drag tourists away just like that. Never in the history."
I wondered whether he really believed what he was saying or he was just ignorant. Lions had a long history of eating human flesh. It wasn't common but it happened often enough. Don't guys watch movies like "The Ghost and the Darkness" in this place? The movie was based on the true story of what happened during the building of the Railway across East Africa in the 1800s. Man eating lions almost halted the project.
There was even the more recent story about a lion that had been killed recently by game wardens in Tanzania, a country that neighbored Kenya's Masai mara, where I was. After examining the dead lion's teeth, experts said they suspected that it had turned to hunting human flesh because of a nagging toothache. Eating softer human flesh aggravated the toothache less.
I can hear you asking the question. No I don't have a degree in one of those animal subjects. I got all the stuff from the internet - remember what I do for a living?
I debated whether to show off my knowledge to the poor camp manager and then decided against it. Better to hold back as much information as possible for when I would really need it. Didn't want to look like I was leading on the investigation.
My mind rushed back to the place where I had met Teresa rather unexpectedly. The place where my destiny had been changed. By a smile from the woman I loved.
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5 Comments:
Nice! I like. "The tears were now flowing freely down my cheeks. I know men don't cry and I wasn't crying, not really, it's just them tears that were running out of control flowing out and stuff." I like this part where the character is in denial. It's sort of amusing. Great job, keep it coming :)
I have to say, I didn't like that new post quite as much. Now, don't take me too seriously, I have next to no writing experience. But it seems to me that you detract from what you were planning to write about in order to add something else into the story. I can understand how describing maneating lions (which I quite enjoy reading about) is important this early in the story, but I can't help thinking that you go off on a rather unproductive tangent. Okay, I know critizism belongs at the end rather than at the beginning but I can't help myself. I really really like the casual way of writing; it reminds me of the writing style one of my friends' uses. What I would really love to read would be some more description. You have a gold mine (yes, joke intended) of scenes and emotions that you have a chance to describe. And I want to hear more about the setting.
Keep up the good work, it's going great!
I agree with swifteye about the description but I don't think the importance of certain details should be such a concern this early on in a novel that is IN PROGRESS. I mean, technically it's a rough draft... unless Chris is playing with us and posting something he's already written, but I doubt that :P Details can be added/removed/fixed after you have a more complete product. Anyway, Chris, I say you're doing fine so far. I think it's entertaining at least hehe.
No. Chris is definitely not taking you for a ride. The novel is being written as we go along and taking all your suggestions into consideration while being careful not to lose track of what I set out to do when I started the tale.
I really appreciate you all so much and what you're doing for me. It would have been very difficult for me to write this without your encouragement and support.
I can assure you that I'm writing this as we go along and it really is an exciting experience. I know a few thingsbut not everything about how the story will develop. Sometimes a character just forces themselves forward out of the blue (like Carol) and has to be stopped from trying to take over the proceedings.
I really appreciate you all for helping to make this so much fun.
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